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For this meeting of our YorkU Graduate Supervision Community of Practice, FGS has invited learned Professors Marlene Bernholtz and Dunja Baus from the 快播视频 Writing Centre to facilitate practical conversation regarding the supervisor\u2019s role in growing graduate student writing skills. Starting with your own reflections on your supervisory - and graduate student - experiences with dissertation\/major paper writing, Marlene and Dunja will offer practical strategies and techniques for guiding the writing process by helping students establish productive writing practices, offering constructive feedback, and\u00a0 creating the kind of reciprocal relationship that encourages graduate student development and professionalization.\u00a0Be the first to access the FGS Graduate Supervision Support Hub\u2019s new resource for supervisors aimed at assisting your work supporting graduate student writing.<\/p>\n<p><span class=\"TextRun MacChromeBold SCXW53542897 BCX8\" lang=\"EN-CA\" xml:lang=\"EN-CA\" data-contrast=\"auto\"><span class=\"NormalTextRun SCXW53542897 BCX8\">Marlene Bernholtz and Dunja Baus<\/span><\/span><span class=\"TextRun SCXW53542897 BCX8\" lang=\"EN-CA\" xml:lang=\"EN-CA\" data-contrast=\"auto\"><span class=\"NormalTextRun SCXW53542897 BCX8\"> are professors in the Writing Department, where they teach in both the Professional Writing Program and in the 快播视频 Writing Centre. 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